Odour of Chrysanthemums
I think the fiction，s exposition is one to three paragraph. Because the fiction，s happened raw afternoon .The portion reveal place which the story happened. By use many adjective to describe the place.
The fiction，s rising action is four to seventy-five paragraph. The fourth paragraph is the fiction，s opening. It mentioned that the woman saw the miner passed the railway, the woman left. After a moment, she requested her child came home fast. But her child was unwilling to go home. So she showed the raspberry canes to her son. But her child seemed to challenge his mother patience. He still stood still. She cannot but change her ways from sternly turned into gently. Although the child still unwilling to go home, he cannot but advanced slowly. But I realized that his still averseness from the fourteenth paragraph – he tore at the ragged wisps of chrysanthemums. I think the action reveal he opposed to go home. When her father went to her home, she seems to dislike her father extremely. Because she let us feel she is so coldness. But she changed her reaction from coldness turn into bitterly when her father mentioned about her husband. I feel she like her husband more than her father. In thirty-five paragraph, she found her husband did not come home. It was half-past four. She cooked dinner and waited him patiently. She saw her children were indifference just like she treated her father. She seems to be occupied by her husband. She guessed her husband probably drank in pub. She worried so she went to railway but she watched the men trooping home fewer and fewer. She worried just like the fire was sinking indoors. Suddenly she found someone came home. And then she found her daughter came home. She chid her daughter and asked her daughter. Did you saw your father？Her daughter answered no. She thought her husband probably still work .In fact, she only comfort herself. She opposed her children saying that chrysanthemum is odorous. She said “It is a scandalous thing as a man can，t even come home to his dinner！”She seemed to somewhat angry. She opened the door once more. I think the sentence reveal she very hoped her husband can come quickly. I think the fiction，s rising action is four to seventy-five paragraph because the portion is the story，s opening, reveal the fiction，s major event, the woman，s mood change, the major character，s introduction, and the relationship about she with her husband.
The fiction，s turning point is seventy-sixth to one hundred sixty-sixth paragraph. The seventy-six paragraph mentioned chrysanthemum，s meaning in their house. Because they ever brought him home drunk, he had got brown chrysanthemums in his button-hole. I think brown chrysanthemum symbol her husband drinking. “Twenty minutes to six！”
He still did not go home. She was very angry. She said that she is a fool. Her husband was cursed. He slunk past his very door. But time was later and later her mood from angry turn into worry. She placed her sewing and decided to go to railway line. She did not find her husband made she became scared. She went to neighbor house and asked Mr.Rigley about her husband. He answer her husband did not come pub. His saying let she understand her husband probably die.“At this, suddenly all the blood in her body seemed to switch away from her heart”just like her present precipice. She is very sad because her husband die. She was startled by the rapid chuff of the winding-engine at the pit, and the sharp whirr of the brakes on the rope as it descended. Again she felt the painful sweep of her blood. She saw her husband and felt very sad. Her mother-in-law went home. She told her mother-in-law her son dead. But her mother-in-law did not believe she said. The man told she about her husband. Her husband seemed to smother. I think the fiction，s turning point is seventy-sixth to one hundred sixty-sixth paragraph because the portion reveal fact slowly and the woman mood change from angry into worry.
The fiction，s falling action is one hundred sixty-seventh to two hundred nineteenth paragraph. The one hundred sixty-seventh paragraph described she became forceful. She thought an appropriate area which placed her husband，s dead body. When her husband，s dead body came, the old woman moaned in a law voice of horror but she was forceful. One of the men had knocked off a vase of chrysanthemums. The vase in full of chrysanthemums which knocked off by a careless person symbol a wonderful life was destroyed. She decided to wash her husband，s dead body with her mother-in-law and blessed her husband.
Because she misunderstood her husband, she was ashamed and felt sorry to her husband in the two hundred nineteenth paragraphs. I think the fiction，s falling action is one hundred sixty-seventh to two hundred nineteenth paragraph because the portion reveal fact.
The fiction，s conclusion is two hundred twentieth to two hundred twentieth-fourth paragraph. She found that he and she were only channels symbol she and he were different individual.
I think the fiction，s exposition is one to three paragraph. Because the fiction，s happened raw afternoon .The portion reveal place which the story happened. By use many adjective to describe the place.
The fiction，s rising action is four to seventy-five paragraph. The fourth paragraph is the fiction，s opening. It mentioned that the woman saw the miner passed the railway, the woman left. After a moment, she requested her child came home fast. But her child was unwilling to go home. So she showed the raspberry canes to her son. But her child seemed to challenge his mother patience. He still stood still. She cannot but change her ways from sternly turned into gently. Although the child still unwilling to go home, he cannot but advanced slowly. But I realized that his still averseness from the fourteenth paragraph – he tore at the ragged wisps of chrysanthemums. I think the action reveal he opposed to go home. When her father went to her home, she seems to dislike her father extremely. Because she let us feel she is so coldness. But she changed her reaction from coldness turn into bitterly when her father mentioned about her husband. I feel she like her husband more than her father. In thirty-five paragraph, she found her husband did not come home. It was half-past four. She cooked dinner and waited him patiently. She saw her children were indifference just like she treated her father. She seems to be occupied by her husband. She guessed her husband probably drank in pub. She worried so she went to railway but she watched the men trooping home fewer and fewer. She worried just like the fire was sinking indoors. Suddenly she found someone came home. And then she found her daughter came home. She chid her daughter and asked her daughter. Did you saw your father？Her daughter answered no. She thought her husband probably still work .In fact, she only comfort herself. She opposed her children saying that chrysanthemum is odorous. She said “It is a scandalous thing as a man can，t even come home to his dinner！”She seemed to somewhat angry. She opened the door once more. I think the sentence reveal she very hoped her husband can come quickly. I think the fiction，s rising action is four to seventy-five paragraph because the portion is the story，s opening, reveal the fiction，s major event, the woman，s mood change, the major character，s introduction, and the relationship about she with her husband.
The fiction，s turning point is seventy-sixth to one hundred sixty-sixth paragraph. The seventy-six paragraph mentioned chrysanthemum，s meaning in their house. Because they ever brought him home drunk, he had got brown chrysanthemums in his button-hole. I think brown chrysanthemum symbol her husband drinking. “Twenty minutes to six！”
He still did not go home. She was very angry. She said that she is a fool. Her husband was cursed. He slunk past his very door. But time was later and later her mood from angry turn into worry. She placed her sewing and decided to go to railway line. She did not find her husband made she became scared. She went to neighbor house and asked Mr.Rigley about her husband. He answer her husband did not come pub. His saying let she understand her husband probably die.“At this, suddenly all the blood in her body seemed to switch away from her heart”just like her present precipice. She is very sad because her husband die. She was startled by the rapid chuff of the winding-engine at the pit, and the sharp whirr of the brakes on the rope as it descended. Again she felt the painful sweep of her blood. She saw her husband and felt very sad. Her mother-in-law went home. She told her mother-in-law her son dead. But her mother-in-law did not believe she said. The man told she about her husband. Her husband seemed to smother. I think the fiction，s turning point is seventy-sixth to one hundred sixty-sixth paragraph because the portion reveal fact slowly and the woman mood change from angry into worry.
The fiction，s falling action is one hundred sixty-seventh to two hundred nineteenth paragraph. The one hundred sixty-seventh paragraph described she became forceful. She thought an appropriate area which placed her husband，s dead body. When her husband，s dead body came, the old woman moaned in a law voice of horror but she was forceful. One of the men had knocked off a vase of chrysanthemums. The vase in full of chrysanthemums which knocked off by a careless person symbol a wonderful life was destroyed. She decided to wash her husband，s dead body with her mother-in-law and blessed her husband.
Because she misunderstood her husband, she was ashamed and felt sorry to her husband in the two hundred nineteenth paragraphs. I think the fiction，s falling action is one hundred sixty-seventh to two hundred nineteenth paragraph because the portion reveal fact.
The fiction，s conclusion is two hundred twentieth to two hundred twentieth-fourth paragraph. She found that he and she were only channels symbol she and he were different individual.
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